IN ENGLISH.....17/30

Cheering myself on
Standing proud to my creation
thinking to myself
I own this gift
I bring forth good peaces(pieces)

REALITY

behind reading eyes
there (their) confusion, your demise
disappointment vs upsetting
and misunderstanding
What is this?
I don't understand?
may be(Maybe) he meant?
Spelling and grammar is not legit
punctuation's is flunct-uation
What am I doing?
What is(are) you saying?
What our(are) you trying to say?
Never in my life had(have) I felt so bad
about offending my
readers,
writers
artist
and teachers
my unfinished conversational piece
is literally illiterate

PROOFING

I inhale(think) exhale(write)
no need to rush in writes
make sure your writes are right
spell check is your friend
critiques is(are) your other friend>>>>>sometimes
be patient
it will all come together
produce your best
reveal your best
and present your work
IN ENGLISH.....

By LeRoy TNW Goetzendanner